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Stay

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Literature Text

Pulling you in,
Drawing you closer,
I stare at you with my heart.

Coming towards me,
Dazed in every way,
Doing what you can to keep from falling apart.

My energy is strong,
my heart is yearning,
I wish in every way to be nearer to you.

Your eyes are piercing,
Your body is shaking,
and you want what I said to be true.

I reach you,
and I can't breathe.
I feel as if my heart might stop.

You take my hand,
and caress me gently,
The weight so heavy that we both could drop.

Will this feeling stay the same forever?
That's a chance we both are willing to take,
because when you feel this way,
nothing can stop you from waiting to stay.
This is for a contest.
I hope you like it as much as I do. :D
© 2008 - 2024 saddlebred44
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Cyrviana's avatar
From a subjective view, this poem needs a little work. It doesn't get the emotion across very well. It has potential, but I don't think you've used it.